In the dark Pt. 1

In the dark pt. 1

I had the funniest hotel concierge EVER during a boring business trip. Thank you so much, Ramon!A poetic story to pass the time…hope you (the reader) enjoys.

I woke up in this dark place.

I’m not sure how I ended up here.

Last thing I remember,

I was in Iraq,

Filling my canteen and realigning my gear.

I can smell a foul odor,

Quite similar to death.

I should know what death smells like,

They call me,

Giver of Last Breath.

It’s tagged on my rifle,

A way to deflect my doings onto it.

But now I lay motionless,

No rifle in hand,

Just opened eyes to nothing,

Myself is all I have.

I try to stand up.

I have no strength.

How long have I been here?

Who put me here?

Why am I here?

I feel a jolt of energy rush through my body.

A jolt, enough to stand me up.

Dark becomes light,

And odor becomes a refreshing breeze.

I am no longer in my tomb of darkness,

I am being pulled out by something…

2 comments on In the dark pt. 1

….that feels likes fulfillment, as I’ve met my destiny.

@InVinceable that was so visual for me. I couldnt help but to write the last line. If you have any queries relating to where and how to use Spotify (talking to), you can call us at our own site. Hope you didn’t mind.

resurrection, can’t live without it ;-). I know that feeling…